English · KS3 Y7 · Writing & Composition

Proof-reading your own work

e52Free5:10Heddy Score 3 of 7, below the standard

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What you need to know

  • The writing task asks for a description or a story from a picture or prompt
  • Methods analysed in the reading section can be borrowed for your own writing
  • Technical accuracy in spelling, punctuation and sentences carries a large share of the marks

In this clip

Heddy Score3/7, Below the standard
  • Trusted source · passed. The creator's own upload, live and playable here.
  • On the map · not judged yet. A teacher watched it: it mainly teaches this map topic.
  • Spec-true · failed. Accurate, and right for the current UK specification.
  • Focused · passed. One idea, short enough to watch in one go.
  • Accessible · passed. Good captions, clear sound and pictures.
  • Safe for children · not judged yet. Right for 11 to 16 year olds, with no sales pitch.
  • Proven · not judged yet. Earned from our students: they learn from it, find it helpful and watch it to the end.
★ passed · ☆ pending · ✕ failed
Our students

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Our own students' answers. These are what move ★7 Proven.
How the Heddy Score works

Why we picked it

Walkthrough of the Paper 1 creative writing task with a sample, made for the 2025 exam format.

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