History · GCSE · Interpretations & Significance

Sustained argument in an essay

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What you need to know

  • A strong essay keeps one line of argument from start to finish.
  • Each paragraph should link back to the question.
  • Weigh the other side before reaching a judgement.
  • End with a conclusion that justifies your view.

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Heddy Score2/7, Below the standard
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